Needs to a Major Revision
Re-write ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY, this is the doc titled Quandre Berryman-Annotated Bib
**Teachers Notes/Comments Below***
Entry on page 10 is a solid example of a more detailed summary paragraph. Use this as a model:)
Also, a note on sentence structure –> as this bib becomes longer so do your sentences (often several run-on sentences are placed in a row). Need to pay careful attention to revising sentence structures if you choose to revise.
Please Read all attached documents!!!!