felix please say one of the reasons it was hard to revise is because i submited essay late so was not able to get peer review as suggestions to revise…please also add anything else you can think of.
What Now (Group Discussion #10)
What Now? (Group Discussion #10)
Identify which of your three essays you foresee having the most difficulty revising in a substantial and meaningful way (i.e. aside from clean up: spelling, documentation, word choice adjustments, etc.). Perhaps you think it’s good the way it is; it is fine to think that it is good the way it is, but that doesn’t mean it can’t be better. Perhaps you’re struggling to rectify some difficult sections. Perhaps you’re not comfortable with the research you’ve found. Perhaps you’re just stuck. Whatever the reason, write a paragraph or two explaining, in as much detail as possible, what you’re struggling with or what you foresee the struggle to be. The more information you provide here, the more helpful this discussion/exercise will be to your revision process. Post your explanation along with an attached file of the essay being addressed.
Your post should be a minimum of 200 words, but feel free to expand as much as seems relevant. Attach the essay being addressed. Your response to other students’ posts should directly reference their essay and, in addition to general feedback about the piece as a whole, be sure to also offer suggested solutions for their self-defined struggles.
Use MLA citations as needed. Additionally, respond substantively (minimum 500 words) to the posts of one peer.